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She don’t idolize ideas
She phantasize on the strange metaphors I realize
She brings me peaches instead of an expensive wrist watch
She reaches down for me when I’m downsized
She in case of sudden darkness carries a humorous torch
She doesn't cover her mouth when She gets into a laughing frenzy
She doesn't settle for nothing and accepts much
She got anger deep nestled in her guts
She got a soft feathered replies to questions that are crazy
She knows about man and his cave
but offers a silent helping hand when it gets messy
She sees things with a convex lens
and listens like she can't get enough
She read the books I want to add to my readings
She dances to music that can't be heard
She's active but semi lazy
She eyes me and sees a word
She's telepathic but not enough to read thought
She admires privacy
She has a pirate's heart but despises piracy
She's not concerned with the size of her breasts
She has the walk as soft as a cat's
yet all the movement is produced from her hips
She doesn't forward me emails not those who are worth it
She explains her point of view on songs
She's all insane enough to have a masters degree
She doesn't hide her fears yet she speaks of them like a poetess
She'll bare & wait for me
She's Cinderella with no shoes
She is limitless, self aware and fearless
She is in her 30's, 40's & 20's
She doesn't iron her hair
She fatherly mother my needs
She knows how to perfectly conjure my ghost
She never fails to convince me that she's in her best dress
She wears pants but with a tendency to wear skirts
She thinks men in uniforms are fake the most
She is a woman like a flower to her thorn
She is a woman who might not have been born.
again ~Electrobaby suggested topic lets see how it works:)
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coloredsoul Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009
thats what i call real great text :)
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shebo Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009  Student General Artist
Thank you!:)

Really:)
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coloredsoul Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009
don't mention it buddy :D
ur poems r realy good nd deep
keep it up and say hello to ur sister rehab from me :D
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shebo Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2009  Student General Artist
Buddy!!

weird choice of words:)
my sister Rehab...!!

Sure!
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coloredsoul Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2009
nice words ..full of love and emotion keep it up dude :)

yes ur nice sister rehab :D
hugs nd kisses to her

have a nice day shebo
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shebo Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009  Student General Artist
Sure but i don't think she knows you as Coloredsoul:)

wala she does?:)
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coloredsoul Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2009
2ollaha salma beta3et "miao miao "
hate3raf 3alal tool :D
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shebo Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009  Student General Artist
"miao miao":)

mashi i hope en de a secret code aw 7aga:P
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shebo Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009  Student General Artist
Thank you!!

You made my day with your words:)
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Dancing-Naked Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2006   General Artist
God everytime I read this I love it more.
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2006  Student General Artist
:)

long lasting useage guaranteed:P

thank u for reading it again:)
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Jazz-YOU Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006
No, I can't comment for real. Sorry:P
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006  Student General Artist
no i wont settle for that....i am the one who is sorry:P

comment or im going to come over and bite u :brushteeth:
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Dancing-Naked Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006   General Artist
I should also say that I love this - every broken part of this.

And I envy you for knowing her ... if only in your mind.

Katine -x-
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006  Student General Artist
i dont know wat to say i only can think of this song called "Hail,hail" by (an american band:P) called peral jam
it goes like this

Ah, is there room for both of us? Both of us apart?
Are we bound out of obligation? Is that all we've got?
I get the words and then I get to thinking.
I don't want to think, I want to feel.
And how do I feel? And how do I...

If you're the only one ,will I never be enough? Yeah.
Hail hail the lucky ones. I refer to those in love. Yeah.

Oh, how I'll love you til the day I die and beyond.
Are we going to the same place? If so can I come?
It's egg rolling thick and heavy. All the past you carry.
Oh, I could be new. You underestimate me.

If you're the only one will I never be enough? Yeah.
Hail hail the lucky ones. I refer to those in love. Yeah.

I sometimes realize I could only be as good as you'll let me.
Are you woman enough to be my man? Bandaged hand in hand.

I find it on the run in a race that can't be won. Yeah.
All hail the lucky ones. I refer to those in love. Yeah.
If you're my only one, so could you only one?
I want to be your one. Enough! You won no one. You're one.

i hope it makes sense to u:)
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Dancing-Naked Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2006   General Artist
It's a a great song, and it kinda makes sence to me ... sorta :P maybe I just want you to spell it out to me

but thanks for sharing it.

-K-
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006  Student General Artist
im all for sharing:)

and im happy it made sense to u...and i'd be pleased to spell it out to u:)
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Dancing-Naked Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006   General Artist
Then start spelling :) I enjoy your sharing and I'll always try to understand.
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006  Student General Artist
ur amazing:)
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Dancing-Naked Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2006   General Artist
I don't always think so but thank you for thinking so
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2006  Student General Artist
well u should know that ur amazing:D
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Dancing-Naked Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006   General Artist
*pouts softly*

I want to meet her now
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006  Student General Artist
i cant wait myself:)
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Dancing-Naked Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2006   General Artist
Lucky arse :P
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006  Student General Artist
lol
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Dancing-Naked Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006   General Artist
;P
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ElectroBaby Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006
Wow! I love the way you wrote this! Love it ! Love it!

Lol, anywho..so many lines that make me smile

"she read the books I want to add to my readings"
"she has a pirate's heart but despises piracy"
"she is in her 30's, 40's & 20's"
"she never fails to convince me that she's in her best dress


She sounds amazing! I hope you find her!
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006  Student General Artist
well im sure she's out there somewhere:)

im glad i got u smiling:D

dont u have more ideas for me?
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ElectroBaby Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2006
I'll have to think about it lol, but I'll be sure to let ya know
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006  Student General Artist
plz do:)
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ElectroBaby Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006
how about revenge?
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006  Student General Artist
Revenge!!!

no see something else:P
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ElectroBaby Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006
no see?

does that mean no, no likie?
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006  Student General Artist
i just dont like revenge it make sound like a cartoon character:)

no a video game character:P
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PaperPile Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006  Professional General Artist
wow!
you know enough about her!
it's really good to know your one! ... what you are an what you want!
that would ease her
recognition!when the time comes! or even if never comes ... knowing is good enough!

i envy u that u were able to put it in words!
but maybe i'll try to put mine in words too!
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006  Student General Artist
well thats just one of them:P

i have many ones...

and hey i will haunt u until u write ur piece of the one of urs:)
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PaperPile Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2006  Professional General Artist
haunt me as musch as u can as far as u can ...

I DONT THINK SO!

maybe one day .. :hmm:
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2006  Student General Artist
one day 2 day 3 day

bas e3melee 7aga:P
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PaperPile Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2006  Professional General Artist
la2 :bonk:
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Jazz-YOU Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006
Okay I'll comment on this.

Lol.
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006  Student General Artist
aiwa keda....do i have to push u ?:P
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Hera666 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006
Amazing piece of art i must say
MWAHHH:D
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006  Student General Artist
viva la woman;)
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Phoneix-Faerie Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
wow , thats great
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006  Student General Artist
thank u ur words mean alot to me :D
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Phoneix-Faerie Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome, its a really brilliant poem :D
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006  Student General Artist
brillant:)

thank u for brightening my day:)
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Phoneix-Faerie Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe yay! glad i could :)
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shebo Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006  Student General Artist
:)
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Phoneix-Faerie Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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